Progressive Rock track - Lyrics and Music created with Suno (With slight Edit) Cleaned using Scrubber - Image created using PowerDirector 365.
LYRICS
[Intro]
On the shore of the first pale dawn
I drew a circle in the sand
Seven lines from a crooked sun
Reached out
Took my hand
[Verse 1]
Old man wrapped in weathered robes
Eyes like rusted silver rings
Spoke in patterns
Crossing roads
Said
“Boy
Your shadow grows its own wings”
He placed a serpent made of glass
Coiled and cracked with colored veins
Said
“Walk the water
Walk the past
Call the tides by their secret names”
[Chorus]
Rise
Serpent of Seven Tides
Curl ‘round the corners of my mind
Bend the river
Break the time
Carry me over the edge of the sky
(oh, carry me high)
[Verse 2]
I stepped out on the breathing sea
Every wave a turning page
Saw my footprints race ahead of me
Growing younger with my age
Mountains floated
Upside down
Roots were scratching at the stars
Every question wore a crown
Every answer lived in scars
[Chorus]
Rise
Serpent of Seven Tides
Curl ‘round the corners of my mind
Bend the river
Break the time
Carry me over the edge of the sky
(keep pulling me high)
[Bridge – 7/8 riff]
Seven stones in a spiral trail
(one – for the fear I hide)
Two worlds split in a serpent scale
(two – for the tears I dried)
Three cold winds in a copper sail
(three – for the names I lied)
Four red moons
And the center frail
(four – where the truth resides)
Seven steps and the shore falls through
I am the question chasing you
Seven beats in a broken wheel
Turning
Burning
Learning to heal
[Pre-Chorus – shifting back to 4/4]
I saw the old man fade to smoke
Only his laughing staff remained
“Every chain is a living joke
Till you dare to speak its name”
[Chorus]
Rise
Serpent of Seven Tides
Curl ‘round the corners of my mind
Bend the river
Break the time
Carry me over the edge of the sky
[Climactic Refrain]
I am the circle in the sand
I am the fire in the rain
I am the child
I am the ancient
Calling your many-colored name (Hey!)
Rise
Serpent of Seven Tides
Rise through the thunder in my veins
One more breath and the worlds collide
And I let go of the weight of my name
[Outro]
On the shore of the last red dawn
Only ripples where I stood
Seven tides breathing as one
And the serpent made of glass
Turned to blood
Love this track. It brings back memories.
Thanks for your comments on my new track.
I have been using SUNO recently and getting to know its wonderful ways. I have tried downloading the stems for this track, so I hope to upload a different version soon, re-mixed in my D.A.W. - Best regards, MCMixmaster 😎
Powerful song, good stuff
Listen to this a few more times. Ready like it.
Very high quality work again. You have a Youtube channel?
Hi Valen Grey, Thanks for your comment. No, I do not have a YouTube Channel ......Yet.